What do you think about girls who ask boys out? Do you think it is okay? Maybe it was widely
considered impossible in the past. However; one thing for sure that now most of you can have a possible outlook about this. As for me, girls are right to express interest in boys by asking them out.
First, most of boys would really like these girls. Not only there is less work but also less pressure for them. Boys could spend much for job instead of thinking the way to impress feeling on girls by a date. Furthermore; there are many boys so shy that that asking for a date is a pressure on them. Then girls take the lead can help these boys. However; some boys may feel be threatened, but if their hearts really felt in love, it is okay. Therefore; when girls take initiative of asking for a date, which is good for either boys or girls.
Secondly; if you are a girl and you like a boy, instead of afraid then ask him out. It is your feeling, your emotion not position of boys and girls. I asked a boy out as soon as I realized my true love for him, and now he is my boyfriend. I believe that true love cannot be compared with the way you show your love. You might be rejected by classical boys but nothing wrong with expressing your feeling by asking your interested boy out. There is a small number people argue it is the role of boys. And they think that girls like that are somehow unattractive. Nevertheless; how can they define what is attraction? Attraction is depend on each one's point of view.My boyfriend said that he prefer to be asked by me for out. Thus; maybe girls who take the lead attract boys.
Last but not least, we are living in a civilized society. The time girls were weaker and dependent has passed,and we cannot distinguish girls from boys. Nowadays it is suitable and appropriate for girls to invite boys out. Another argument against that boys would prefer to subdue rather than being subdued. Yet this thinking is somehow not right. In fact many gentlemen boys do not think so. They are pleasure with girls who are not so self-conceited. They would prefer to have a chance with girls than being rejected. For this reason, the girls should grab at the chance to do what their heart tell , if not it may go by.
In conclusion, there is nothing wrong with girls ask boys out. I hope that with all my argument above, girls can be more confident to ask their interested boys out.
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para 2: topic sentence is not well - supported :"First, most of boys would really like these girls" Why? How?
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