Abortion is a process of ending a pregnant early in order to prevent a baby from developing.
Although abortion can be accepted in some special cases, but it still has bad influences oemotional
aspects, physiological effects of women, and our country's culture.
Abortion can bring freedom to men and women but also make them feel guilty. The men can
become more excruciating, as a result of their secret sin. The women can become more
vulnerable and even suicide. Moreover; the guilty feelings make them be anxiety, depression,
and anger. Therefore; they cannot have many ambitions, motivations for dreaming. As a
consequence, these guilty feelings became an obsession with parents who destroyed themselves
children.
Another bad effect of abortion is physiological effects of women. After having abortion, the
future reproductive system of women are strongly impacted. According to estimate, about 35
percent higher than the normal rate of miscarriages occur with women who had abortion.
Still, abortion leads to infertility and ectopic pregnancy for women. Furthermore; the result
of previous abortion make breast tissue of women be left in a dangerously stimulated that leads
to breast cancer.
Finally, abortion strongly impacts to our country's culture. I heard that: " Abortion grieves
the heart of God". Abortion means killing a life.Especially is in our country which it is illegal for
abortion. We all condemn having abortion to innocent children. Therefore; having abortion is
against our culture of humanity.
In conclusion, I hope that the three bad influences of abortion on emotional affects,
physiological effects ,and our country's culture that I tell you could help us avoid having abortion
more. And there will no abortion in the near future.
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